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Global Perspectives · May / June 2025 · Paper 11 · Question 3

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Study Source 4. Which argument is more convincing, Aput’s or Panuk’s? Your answer should: • consider both arguments • evaluate their reasoning, evidence and use of language • support your judgement with their words and ideas.

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Your answer should:

consider both arguments
evaluate their reasoning, evidence and use of language
support your judgement with their words and ideas.

Main Annotations

Tables E and F

Use these tables to give marks for each candidate response.

Table E

Analysis (AO1)

Level

Description

7–8 4

Consistently analytic throughout and fully supported

Analyses a wide range of aspects of both arguments.
Frequent use of relevant material taken from the

source.

Clear and explicit comparison of the two arguments. 5–6 3

Mainly analytic and supported

Analyses a range of aspects of both arguments.
Some use of relevant material taken from the source.
Clear comparison of the two arguments.

3–4 2

Partly analytic and descriptive with some support

Analyses a limited range of aspects of both

arguments.

Occasional use of material taken from the source.
Implied comparison by simple juxtaposition of the two arguments.
1–2 1

Descriptive and unsupported

Analyses a limited range of aspects of one argument.
Little or no use of material taken from the source.

0

No creditable response

0

Table F

Evaluation (AO1)

Level

Description

7–8 4

Consistently evaluative throughout and fully explained

Detailed and reasoned explanation of a wide range of evaluative points throughout the response.
Both reasoning and evidence within the arguments in the source are evaluated explicitly.
Clear, supported judgement consistent with the

candidate’s argument.

5–6 3

Mainly evaluative and explained

Reasoned explanation of a range of evaluative points within most of the response.
Reasoning and/or evidence within the arguments in the source are evaluated.
Judgement generally consistent with the candidate’s argument.

3–4 2

Partly evaluative with little explanation

A limited range of evaluative points that are mostly

descriptive and/or asserted with little explanation.

Reasoning and/or evidence within the arguments in the source are mostly described.
Judgement lacks some clarity and may be partly

inconsistent with the candidate’s argument.

1–2 1

Descriptive without explanation

One or two evaluative points that are asserted,

tangential or not relevant.

The topic or the arguments in the source are

described.

Judgement is unclear and inconsistent with the

candidate’s argument or may not be included.

0

No creditable response

0 Indicative content

Candidates are expected to evaluate the arguments presented in Source 4. They should make a supported judgement with some explanation about which person has the most convincing argument. Candidates may support their judgement by considering some of the following aspects of the arguments: Strength of reasoning:

logic
structure
balance
claims

Use of language:

tone – emotive, exaggerated, precise, measured
clarity

Evidence:

range of information and depth
relevance
sufficiency – sample size
source – media; internet
date – how recent
different types of information – fact, opinion, value, anecdote
testimony – from experience and expert

Sources of bias or vested interest:

local interest
economic
personal values
experience

Possible consequences of the ideas or actions presented

Acceptability of their values to others:

how likely other people are to agree with their perspective/view Other relevant responses should be credited.

Examples of evaluative points candidates are likely to discuss are outlined as follows.

Argument

Strengths

Weaknesses Aput

Uses relevant
Not much evidence. examples as evidence.
Uses value judgements
Clear, logical

that others may not agree argument.

with.

References historical.
Research not fully evidence/examples.

referenced or cited.

Refers to research that
Some assertion. is partly cited and
Not balanced.

referenced.

Other relevant response.
Respectful language
Measured language.
Other relevant

response.

Argument

Strengths

Weaknesses Panuk

Passionate about
Few examples.

subject.

Little evidence.
Balanced argument.
Little expert opinion.
Refers to experience of
Some assertion. father as evidence.
Some disrespectful
Acknowledges

language.

counterarguments.

Potential for bias and
Other relevant

vested interest. response.

Other relevant response. AO1 Analysis

AO1 Evaluation

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